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Friday, November 29, 2013
Tips for writers: "Oh and another thing," he stirred his tea
Wrong: "Oh and another thing," he stirred his tea. "Blah blah."
Better: "Oh and another thing." He stirred his tea. "Blah blah."
"He stirred his tea" is not a way of speaking.
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